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I need to have a surgery done so I'm trying to find extra cash that i can put away for it. So i decided i would try and offer my services here as a proofreader slash critique.

Have you ever wondered if your story is any good? I have always said the hardest part about writing is getting someone to read it. Let me do that for you. 

Genre: Any Genre - Fiction or non-fiction.
Price: Price is based off your total word count. The more words the lower the price per word becomes. In other words the more words you send me, the cheaper it gets. (I'm also open to negotiations on price.) Please contact me for a price quote.

  • Opening line
  • Plot
  • Characters
  • Dialogue
  • Missing Words
  • Pacing and Flow
  • Description
  • Show vs Tell
  • Wordiness
  • And my personal favorite, one that i see more often then anything else "Echoes" (That's where the same word is used within the same paragraph multiple times.)
Please be aware that this is not a grammar edit, but a proofread and critique. I leave comments for you to fix them and hopefully learn how to improve.


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Bryan Stevenson
United States
Current Residence: Wyoming
Favorite genre of music: rock alternative
Favorite cartoon character: Think i like Luffy from One Piece the most, although Natsu from Fairy Tail is moving up in the list


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Jencity Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Professional Writer
I just want to take a moment to thank you for being one of my watchers. :w00t:
Your support, thusfar, means a great deal to me.

Since you found something in my gallery to your liking, I'm hoping you'd consider checking out my comic on FaceBook. I've been working hard on this project for a while now, and - come the first of the year - we'll be launching a fundraising campaign so the comic can be produced. Even if you can't donate, yourself, sharing the project with friends and family - even liking the page to show support - would mean the world to me.

Again, thank you for watching, and thank you for all the support you've shown.

Time to get back to work. :work:
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